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Brett Borders: The Death of the Sales Letter?

  • Michel Fortin · 3 years ago
    While I agree with your post in principle, you threw me off when you said "the copywriters who crank this stuff out defend it saying..."

    You seem to be interpreting that as a defense. It might be, but it's not to defend real scams and snake oils who use, overuse and abuse a proven strategy, which is what your post implies.

    My take? They're defending the universal statement you make. (On the flip side, some of them do the same thing, which I also don't agree with. They scoff at genuine, more professional attempts to market by "calling out" anti-marketers who, in turn and in their view, try to defend their turf by going too far with their near-fascist views.)

    Bottom line, I actually agree with you. In fact, you're proving the point: that you're not the market for these types of products or services.

    Just as much as you're proving that, in this new Web 2.0, where people can interact more and are more susceptible to be more vocal about abusive marketing strategies, there's not only a need for new types of marketing but that both camps can stop, breathe for a moment and take some time to learn from one another.

    In my opinion, the problem is not the use of salesletters. It's their pervasiveness. The overuse, in other words. (And I believe you did a great job at pointing that fact out.) Why does every bloody direct marketing website have to use clumsy-looking, red-headline, long copy salesletter?

    And this, without thought or creativity or strategy or effort.

    It's laziness, pure and simple.

    And it's not the copywriter. It's the business owner. In fact, people copy what they see work online, but don't understand that what sells a million bucks in a day for John Reese in one market may not be the right approach for every situation.

    And vice versa.

    (And that's the same kind of universal paradigm that can hurt either side.)

    Salesletters are salesletters. But there are "scammy-looking," lackluster, "me-too" salesletters with bold red headlines and such, and there are hard-to-navigate, fancy-looking, left-brain bonanzas that require geek 501 to learn how to buy from.

    The former bashes the latter, and vice versa.

    I believe there's a happy medium. Personally, I'm against the copycats -- not the copywriters -- who don't take more time and money to invest in their presentation.

    And by the same token, I'm also against the Web 2.0 early-adopting purist clique who are against any kind of salesletter, whether it's a clean website or a long-scrolling web page, simply because it -- aw, shucks -- makes money.

    My take? Take the time to learn how about direct marketing but all the while use you cranium (and your resources, including your ingenuity) to be more professional, cleaner and usable, with a strategic presentation that fits their specific market and time.

    So, "bravo" for an excellent post. I think it's about time people start seeing this for what it really is. Which is a need to evolve to fit new or shifting markets, without having to copy every joe-blow website thinking that a successful approach is universally applicable.
  • brett · 3 years ago
    Wow, Michael!

    Thanks for the honest and well-written post. I really do respect and appreciate your insight.

    I think the sales letter is a good tool that people are getting clubbed to death with. Most people will eventually develop an immunity to it, just like I have.

    Maybe some folks have an eternal attention span and will read ten pages of hype down to the end and follow the instructions - but I know that a lot of people won't read more than a few lines of text before they click away.

    All kinds of pseudomarketing schemes that USED to work in the print world, like Scientology, MLM and chain letters, are being cracked open and washed away because people now have the ability freely communicate online, do research and criticize things.

    I have nothing against web sites that make money. I am a marketer, not a critical purist. I just believe that a certain segment of savvy online consumer will grow to appreciate and respond to a less-manipulative, more straightforward approach. And I am going to blaze some trails towards a new online copywriting paradigm - or die trying.

    Copywriting 2.0 is going to happen
    . Look at AdWords - the format is forcing marketers into using zen brevity, creativity and reverse psychology like never before! Human psychology may have some hard wired emotions and desires that can always be stimulated with the classic methods, but I think the book on copywriting is far from already written.

    There's so much more to come. We are witnessing the dawn of NEW tested advertising methods that the cigar-smoking mail order mavericks could never have imagined in their wildest dreams.

    - Brett

    P.S.
    Money or not, I much prefer dealing with sharp people as my customers and clients. It's more of a challenge, but it's significantly more satisfying to me than working with the gullible, the desperate and the easily persuaded.

    That's the reason why I decided to get out of social work and into interactive marketing!
  • Halina Goldstein · 2 years ago
    I'm new to this... What is Copywriting 2.0 exactly? I'm all ears!
    (Am I doing copywriting 2.0 on my blog I wonder?)

    ?

    Thanks

    Halina
  • brett · 2 years ago
    Halina,

    I think that as information technology enables consumers to receive more and more offers, all competing for their attention, they will get increasingly savvy. New design styles and persuasion tactics will be required to sustain good response rates.

    Something more subtle, sincere, and sophisticated than the lurid red headlines and benefits intensive bullets of yesteryear.

    -brett
  • Halina Goldstein · 2 years ago

    Thanks Brett,


    Did you see the new John Reese report (and my humble comments to it :-). It's so in tune with what you're saying.


    And I just realize I should use your word "sincerety" rather than honesty. Will go back and do that in a sec...
    http://www.halinagold.net/marketing/?p=56


    Best wishes


    Halina

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  • Mike Paahana · 2 years ago

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